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Tuesday 2 September 2014

Samoan Narrative Writing



Harlem and Josh were both in the hospital for 1 and a half years. finally when they got out they both lost their memories of what their jobs and family names and they didn’t know each other so there memories and personalities were different. Harlem was the police man and the smart one and Josh was the athletic one. After that they got their own house & their own personalities back but one day Harlem, & ,Josh Were going to their uncles, and aunties house but when they got their they both didn’t know each other.


  
So they were arguing with each other until their aunt came and saw them fighting and she didn’t recognize both of them either so she told Harlem & Josh to get of their property or she will call the police and Josh, said I’m a cop’’. But she didn’t believe Josh so they were driving and both of them were remembering what happened that day but their personalities got changed back to themselves and Josh was thinking really hard about that day and realized that Harem was his Brother.



So they got each others number on their phone and Josh called Harlem and Both were talking about that day and they went back to their aunties for a discussion and both of them were talking about what what happened that day and they and they began friends again and they both got jobs Josh was promoted to the chief of the police and harlem was in the commonwealth games and he was in the lego movie and Josh was in the Rio 2 and they both were happy the end.





1 comment:

  1. I am very proud of this post because it has full stops, and some commas, This Blog Post has some detail with characters, good endings and pictures. The story is really interesting and it has more Characters than just two of them and the best thing is that they both got what they wanted in the story.

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