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Sunday 21 February 2016

What a good brother looks like

Being a good brother is to be there when he they are not happy or when they are sad
A good brother is someone who is kind
A good brother is someone that helps you when something bad happened
A good brother is when you helping people who are not having a great day at school


A good brother is someone that is really helpful when they are getting bullied & you help them so they can be allright & better so they will be ok to come to school ever day. A good brother is someone that protects his family & friends whenever there getting hurt. A good brother is someone that is strong brave & will protect his friends & family whenever they are down.



A good brother is someone who is always using positive language.

A good brother is someone who uses positive/encouraging words to & gestures

What a good brother looks like & sounds like

4 comments:

  1. I love the detail and truth in your writing. I agree with you and what a good brother looks likes, lots of descriptive words in your texts that I really like. A very good level three piece of writing.
    Dreshawn Hape-Edwards.

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  2. Its cool how you write about you feelings and not writing about being all manly. And all people can get mad at your brothers but it looks like you love your brother buy the way you used a poem and a good truthful description. From Heath Carter

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  3. i wish my brother was reading this blog so i can have a non yelling ,swearing brother but noooo but greatg blog anyway it's really good

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