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Wednesday 7 August 2013

tuatara and mango the shark

here is a story about a tuatara and a sharkOnce upon a time there lived a shark called mango and a tuatara and one morning they saw a fish party. And tuatara said to mango there is more fishermen and mango asked how many are there and then tuatara said about forty of them said tuatara. and when the fishermen went into their canoe. tuatara went up close and overturned the boat and then a taniwha jumped out from the water and then the fishermen fell out of the canoe and as fast as a flash mango the shark ate the fishermen. after tuatara was grumpy that mango ate all the fishermen and then mango said to tuatara why don’t you go on land said mango and then tuatara went to the shore and frightened the fishermen and then mango called tuatara to come back and tuatara shaked his head because the sun is warm and i can catch food easier and now tuatara stays on land and mango lives in the sea.

1 comment:

  1. Good effort Josh. You've got some very long sentences. Did you get a friend to check your work before you published this?

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