Persuasive Argument

I have made a paragraph about a persuasive Argument hope you like it

We should we have school from Monday to Friday because i love going to school because sometimes you get fun activities like word find, maze or you get to free time write yes or no

In my opinion i love learning about the tasks that our teacher gives us if we don’t go to school every five days a week we will not get a job, reputation and a house.

i think this because teachers need a rest and need to be healthy and need to be well rested to teach good.