And when we got into to the pool it was so COLD that I was freezing when I got out then I went on the diving board it was cold and I went to the water slide lots of times it was cold and dark and people were screaming yelling and shouting Loudly.
Then we went into the inside pool it was cool and we saw the year 8s like Darius and other people and me and my cousin Zane were swimming in the lane where people practise swimming. We Learnt how to do bake strokes.
Joshua
ReplyDeleteGreat that you were writing about your holidays and continuing to post again. I would be interesting in seeing if you could answer a question. Are you talking about the pools in Panmure? Many years ago I used to teach in the area and I am not sure if there are pools in Glen Innes, but we used to go to Lagoon with my old school.
I liked how you reserved your use of capitals to the word 'COLD" and wrote it as 'COLD' it really made it stand out and seem important, I did like the last paragraph too when you spoke about swimming in the practise swimming lane, it told me that your swimming must have been fast and important.
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