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Wednesday 9 March 2016

Hawks revenge

This is a story that I re-crafted and de-constructed to make it sound better and more interesting about this story & I changed the old writing into a more interesting exciting story. Hope you enjoy


Hawks Revenge
Once there was a Hawk as fast as lightning it could saw through trees in 2 seconds it was a predators to different other species of birds including the Falcon, The famous dodo bird that is naturally extinct & the earth's most natural bird predator the the bald eagle. That bird can saw through trees 10x as fast as the hawk it could breath underwater for 1 whole minute it is the most extreme bird in the world.
Hawks were fascinating creatures. They are as fast as lightning and could saw through trees in 2 seconds. It was a predators to different other species of birds including the Falcon, the famous dodo bird that is naturally extinct and the earth's most natural bird predator the the bald eagle. That bird can saw through trees 10 times as fast as the hawk. It could also breath underwater for 1 whole minute. Often people call it the most extreme bird in the world. 

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