Keeping clean how can we keep clean?
How we keep clean is when we wash our hands before eating and by eating with our knives and forks. If we don’t use our knives and forks we will get germs in our mouths or on computers of any device.
Bite sized pieces
Bite sized pieces is if you steak or meat is to hard you cut it in half then you can so that it will be better to chew so you can’t choke on anything hard to bite like you steak or your meat and any kind of meat so using your knives and forks is the best.
Use your manners
How you can use your manners we use our manners by saying thank you saying the prayer doing the dishes and help set up the table for dinner or a celebration like christmas new years or someones birthday.
Why we use a knife and fork
We use a knife and fork because we have to keep our hands clean and never eat with your hands because we will get germs on phones, computer and different kinds of things
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