Wednesday, 19 June 2013
Narative writing
this is my narative writing
once upon a time there lived an Emperor penguin called luke and a leopard seal called ben .when the emperor penguin went looking for fish the Emperor penguin turned around he saw the the leopard seal then the Emperor penguin saw the leopard seal then the Emperor penguin swam away but the leopard seal caught up to the Emperor penguin then the leopard seal then there was a big iceberg.
then the iceberg was too big for the penguin to move then the iceberg fell into little bits of ice then the iceberg broke then the penguin penguin had a chance to get past the iceberg but then penguin got through the falling ice bergs then the leopard seal was still hungry then he went looking for other emperor penguins
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