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Pseudoscience task

What was the author's main message in pseudoscience

The author’s main message is that you never trust information that is given to you by any source of gossip which centres the attention to the person that said what had to be said in there mind but isn’t right to say like the 1st world war the british air force had a radar that had known where the germans will be planned to bomb the country but the news reporters were about to say on the newspaper until the air force said “ You guys can not say something about our radar system” So they had told a lie and said that carrots had give you really good eyesight.

What are some of the differences between scientists and advertisers?

Scientists	Advertisers
They find out lots of different ways to find out a scientific breakthrough, Examples like these scientist. Mentos + Coke, Baking Soda + Vinegar.	These advertisements use people to buy there product so they can have a better a life in there infomercial job, Advertisements trick people other than science were people find out the actual discoveries.
Scientist use their discoveries to help out the viruses going around and killing people in the countries that have nothing to live off and that's what the scientist help with. For example, Like the ebola virus & Even the zika virus.	Advertisements have hypmotised people to buy and even trade there stuff for money to buy and even the people really in need used there money that they get from people spend on the advertisements. For example like the Mop, The Sweg way & Even the Hoverboard.

Write 3 sentences explaining something new you’ve learned from this reading.

Something i learnt was that advertisements have more belief then scientist, Because they have more evidence in their project than the scientific evidence because evidence in the shows have more quality than the scientist quality.

The Experiment Gone Wrong: The Phys co Scientist

Title : The Experiment Gone Wrong	The Psycho Scienctist
Characters	Kids, Jake & Logan, Scientist, Mr Rob
Orientation	Scientist Discovery, Kids Find Out
Problem	Mr Rob The Scientist
Solution	They Put Mr Rob ( Mad Scientist ) Behind Bars

Title:  The Experiment Gone Wrong

One day in the year of 2016 in a middle school in america near the end of the year the was and orientation around the school which the parents would see if the school is good for their children. But as they walk past the parents children had saw a man in the science lab working on a discovery to make him famous in the scientific history but the antidote he was working on would lead him to another 2 years work of that discovery.

As the new year of 2017 had started the new entrance kids had started there classes of middle school but there were 2 brothers that had started in the same class there names where Logan & Jake they had started in math in the first block then P.E, Phys Ed, Writing, English Then at the end they started in science class where there was a teacher called Mr Rob who had been teaching since the 1990s.

As the kids walked in the room all they could smell was smoke and their teacher had been working on something that could change the world. With a quiet whisper Jake said to Logan “Wasn’t he that scientist that we saw at our orientation last year” Then Logan replied “Yeah” Then Mr Rob said “Ok Everyone please take your seats” As everyone took their seats Mr Rob's sight was really bad and as they had stood with remark his voice sounded better without the sound of the earth imploding from his big explosions . As they got into work they were working on an assignment for the teacher. When the kids go into work there where stuff in the room under the table too that could cause them to a sickness but the kids were touching them like non stop.

Without Mr Rob’s glasses, Mr Rob was colour blind he had no colour in his left eye but he could see with his right eye with really good sight. The next day the 2 brothers walked to school they had seen a hint of smoke coming from the schools chimney which smoke never goes through the last time smoke went through the old chimney was when the christmas party had started at the school then ended that night. Because of the science labs smoke had risen into the fire place then the smoke had risen and hit the water spouter and then the chimney had let smoke out and right after that the fire place started to light fire and then the old chimney had gone down in smoke.

TO BE CONTINUED

Rewriting Instructions

Instructions should have clear, simple steps so you don’t confuse the person reading them.

Can you make these various instructions easier to understand?

Pick up an egg, gently hit it against the side of a bowl and empty the contents into a clean bowl.	Simply pick up an egg and gently hit it against the side of the bowl then slightly after that empty the contents into a clean bowl.
Open the fridge and take out the butter. Take off the lid. Get a knife and use it to scoop some butter. Rub the knife onto the toast.	Open the fridge, and take the butter out, Take off the lid. Get a knife and use the bread for the butter so you can have a yummy sandwich or toast.
Hold the two shortest sides of paper and bend them together. Squeeze them so that the paper is now in half.	Hold the 2 shortest sides of the paper & you would have to bend them together so you would have paper in half.
When you hear the sound of the whistle, move one leg in front of the other as quickly as you can.	When you suddenly hear a sound of a whistle, Quickly move one leg so you can get out of the situation as quick as you can.
When player One had rolled the dice, they should hand it to player Two, who should then roll it too. The person with the highest score moves their counter first.	When player one had rolled the dice they should then give it to roller two who might have a better chance at the game than player one.
If you want to turn on the computer, look for the round, lack power button and press it once.	If you would like to turn on your computer, Look for the round, Coloured button so you could turn on your computer.
Hold the handles of the scissors and cut along the dotted line, making sure you don’t hurt yourself.	Hold onto your scissors and make sure you won’t hurt yourself while you do this, You would have to cut along the dotted lines and remember please do not hurt yourself
Before you start mixing the ingredients, switch on the oven and turn the dial to 140 degrees.	Before you start mixing remember the ingredients, Switch on the oven and then turn the dial to 140 degrees so i can cook faster.
Take the lid off the glue stick and rub the glue on the tab, being careful not to get any glue on your clothes.	Take of the lid of the glue stick and make sure you don’t drop the glue stick and be carefull you don’t put it in your mouth or make sure it's not in reach of children ages 2 to 4.

Hope you enjoy

Instructional Writing

Think Board Master

The Burger Experiment

This experiment is showing how our class does our experiment, This experiment is the burger experiment we wait for 35 days till the burger begins to rot and our teacher Miss Berry will take pictures of it so then we have to wait 35 days and see what happens.

Fair Testing

Today we are learning about fair testing, Fair Testing is making scientific changes. For example by using vinegar and baking powder that will make a big rocket that means that will make a big bang from the bottle to the sky. That's 1 example for now I hope you enjoy my Google Drawing.

Triathlete Sam

This is a story about a person named Sam he had a injured collar bone and a shattered bone and he kept going to inspire kids to keep going because when Sam had a injury he kept going and training so he can still be in the triathlon.

Hope You Enjoy.

Can You Solve The Mystery

Mystery One:

A crime happened at Freemont Street. The main suspect is a man named Sean Baker. It was said that a man had been walking along the pathway when he was suddenly shot in the stomach. The suspect had brown hair, blue eyes, and wore a baggy suit, just like Sean Baker’s.

Sean was asked to tell the story right from the beginning. “Well,” said Sean, “I was just hanging around the park when I saw this man walking along the pathway. Suddenly, a guy came up from behind him and shot him! I ran home as fast as I could.” The policemen asked him to give a description of the murderer.

Sean said, “He had a red moustache, red hair, and a baggy Armani suit on.”

“I think this man is telling a lie,” said one of the policemen. How did he know?

Mystery Two:

Poor Mr. Teddy was found dead in his study by Mr. Fiend.

Mr. Fiend recounted his dismal discovery to the police:

“I was walking by Mr. Teddy’s house when I thought I would just pop in for a visit. I noticed his study light was on and I decided to peek in from the outside to see if he was in there. I walked through the snow towards the window, and I had to wipe the condensation off the window to see inside. That is when I saw his body. I kicked in the front door to confirm my suspicions of foul play. I called the police immediately afterward.”

The officer immediately arrested Mr. Fiend for the murder of Mr. Teddy.

How did he know Mr. Fiend was lying?

Mystery Three:

A man was found murdered Sunday morning. His wife immediately called the police. The police questioned the wife and staff and got these

answers:

The wife said she was sleeping. The cook was preparing breakfast. The gardener was gathering vegetables. The maid was getting the mail.

aThe police instantly arrested the murderer. Who did it and how did they know?

The Case Of The Phantom Tagger

The case of the phantom tagger is about 3 boys that have been a accused of tagging by the pool porter of the hotel and the detective is one of the boys dads which is one of the accused boys.

Hope You Enjoy.

The Mobile Garden

This is a presentation about a Mobile Garden, A mobile garden is a garden that moved fresh vegetables to a kitchen in a few days that the veges were going to rot but then the king thought of a great plan to keep them fresh and clean at the same  time they travelled to the sultans kingdom.

Hope you enjoy.



 

Having a experience at Tamaki college

Yesterday we had one of the best experiences of my year at Pt England School we had our own college experience at Tamaki college we learnt about lots of subjects like Social Studies, English, Math or (Algebra) & we even learn´t about P.E were we played a couple of games.





Here Are some photos of what we learn´t:

Here is a short story of a fairy tale about the 3 little pigs Short Story:

What Happened I Just Witnessed The Most Unbelieving Story My Mother Just Died By Getting An Axe Into Her Stomach. Hi My Name Is Charlie I am A Wolf You Might Know Me From Destroying And Eating Little Pigs Or Trying To For My Survival In These Hollow Woods I Might Not Come To Your Senses ¨My Mom Died From Getting Murdered By A Fellow Hiker Walking Through The Woods And As Soon As He Heard Loud Noises From The Little Cottage He Had To Come And Save The Day And Kill My Only Friend My Mother. Her Name Was Mary She Was A Loving Mom She Had To Look For Something To Help Her Survive But The Axe Man Is Really Stupid For Killing My Mother He Knew She Was Trying To Help The Old Lady From A Disease Called The Plague That Started Spreading Around The Whole World. Then I Started Meeting People That Needed Help With That Serious Problem That I Just Got The Worst Of Myself I Was Really Hungry I Was Hallucinating For A Long Period Of Time That I Just Said To Myself ¨It's Time To Strike So I Looked Around Found Some Cottages To Look In And Then I Found My Prey For The Season Those 3 Little Pigs Thats My Story To Be Continued.......

And here is a presentation about social studies and what we learn´t in that period.

Hope You Enjoy This Post.

Lost In The Ranges

This is a presentation about a young boy in the 1960s named Bryan & A diary entry about a boy named Charlie & his dad David that survived a tragic accident when his head got crushed by a rock but he survived that tragic event I hope they are Ok & I hope you enjoy this presentation and story

Expo Presantation

This Presentation is about my Group Called Squad Goalz. We are learning about the sport that is really famous in Brazil it is (Football or Soccer) we are researching we had lots of facts about like Did you know that Germany Beat Argentina 1-0 in the world cup final in 2014. Now Portugal beat France in the Euros final in 2016. The presentation has stuff about there diet & links and sites we visited for example the (Nike Site) & Videos like Skills &Tricks. Hope You Enjoy The Presentation.

The strength of roots

This is a presentation so we can learn about our vocabulary so that can help us for word sentences. Our W.A.L.T  Identify language features of the text and sentence types

Cross Country

This is my story on how cross country went for me on the day. Hope you enjoy

It was an overcast day the people in my age group sat on the hot blazing concrete the clouds had a grey setting to it as it was my age group turn the people got up they had a feeling of butterflies in their stomach their hearts were racing really fast. Everyone around me was trying to get a better spot but as soon as I looked at Mr burt he made the noise that had a gun shot noise tone to it as soon as everyone heard it we were off.

Everyone sprinting to the first checkpoint of the race people were running for their lives like it was a earthquake.As I looked around people's goal were just to come in the top 3 positions. But                                                                                                                                                                                                   

as soon as we got to the 2nd checkpoint I was determined to come 2nd or 3rd as we got to the teachers I had a burning sensation in my lungs and heart as we got to the next bunch of teachers I was really tired but I was determined to come in the top 10. As soon as the sun went away it started to get easier to run another lap but when it came back the blazing hot sun was making me sweat like if I was on a desert island.

When we got on to our 2nd lap it was getting harder and harder to run. Every part in my body felt like there were going to give up. My stomach had a big burning sensation and my heart had a burning sensation like it was going to burn me alive but I was starting to feel like I was going to stop but as soon as I got halfway I felt better about myself. When the teachers kept motivating us everyone kept up with their pace and kept going.

As Soon as I saw the finish line I felt like I just ran a triathlon when I jogged to the finish line I still had the burning sensation in my heart. As I walked to the water stand I was so thirsty that I grab the water dumped it over my head and I was proud that I had finished the race and that was how my day at the cross country went.

The Olympic History

According to olympic history the games were made in 776 BC not long after Jesus died. Every year they had a religious festival to Honour the famous god Zeus so they make sacrifices with the ox which is a big cow that they sacrifice to please the gods but now the olympic is not just a religious festival it is international level.

The sports a included by Boxing, Javelin, Chariot riding & Horse riding & Races which you have to run 100 metres with armour and a sword so you will not get killed by the opponents running with you. And  The great town Olympia was were the olympic or religious festival took place.

Then when it got to the the late years of the Greek history a person named Theodosius shut down the Olympics forever but the best sporting event that is well known wouldn’t be shut down forever. But now the Olympic sport does not have poetry or singing they have sporting events that you can get injuries from but now the included new sports including Rugby, Football, Tae Kwon-do, Wrestling & Judo.

Now when the Olympics was shut down they had no idea what they were going to please the powerful god Zeus and the had now clue how to please him but then when was close to the 1800 century one person thought that the Olympia were not going to be ended forever then he stood up and found a solution.

He was talking to some people then they agreed with him to bring the Olympia back but now it's called the Olympics when the person told everyone he thought again to make it into a worldwide sport so the world could join in on what the Greeks enjoyed for a long period of time so they announced that the sport is worldwide so when the word spread out the Greeks said it would done every 4 years.

When it came to the 1800 century the games took place in Paris. Then in the 1900 century the Olympics took place in London then on and on the Olympics became an event that is worldwide famous. But now the  event is being taken in Rio in Brazil where people could get diseases but people have events that are more fun to keep them going for gold.

And that is how the Olympics started.  

Violet Walrond

This story is based on a 14 year old Olympic swimmer that made it to her first big challenge or competition this was located in Belgium in the early 1900 century. But the story is asking us on how she got there as well as she made it into the Olympics.

Six days a week

This is a presentation about a girl that has a talent which is involved around sport. She is a 13 year old that can swim lengths that are amazing in the pool and out in the ocean and she has no fear of doin any competition because she knows she will smash it.

Wool & Nail art

In Mr Wiseman class we are doing Wool and nail art. We use wool and nails and we make really good nail art out of those 2 thing we have to try make origami Hope you enjoy.

Wakas @PES

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Today we are describing about what wakas in this presantation are about the are very special to all of us because we would not of had our amazing ancestor that were upon us hope you enjoy the padlet & the presantation.

Pacific Origins: Type of wakas

Immersion assembly brainstorm

 This is a brainstorm about what we did at the immersion assembly & describing about what it was like Hope you Enjoy

Immersion assembly

Yesterday was the beginning of term 2 we had immersion assembly for the second time of the year of 2016 . There were five teams performances by the teachers year 7 & 8 we had lots of fun & last term but now we have to get through term 2. This term we have lots to learn till we go to term 3 and we have a new theme for the term called (as i see it). We had items occurring  our Favourite things, The seasons, Grand designs & architecture & Finally comic art. The place that we did the immersion assembly was in the hall  we do everything as a school. When we had our assembly was in the morning which happens every year till the end of the year.



Team 5 did an amazing waka race. The race started off with wakas that were guided by ancestors, the ocean, blood, sweat & tears & finally the stars or constellations. The boat that was guided by ancestors were the great waka Hokulea the boat that was guided by the ocean was Hinemoana that boat was guided by the ocean master tangaroa finally the boat that was guided by btlood, sweat & tears is Te'Aurere. Te'Aurere is a waka  that has blood, sweat & tears because of the ancestors that worked really hard to get the name Te'Aurere.



The race started of with each waka introducing them self. Then the race started it was really entertaining to watch there were lots of laughs from the school. But at the end the waka that came first was Hokulea the waka guided by the ancestors of the great waka & thats why the Hokulea waka won the race.

Memory Brainstorm

Brainstorm Map

Hawks revenge

This is a story that I re-crafted and de-constructed to make it sound better and more interesting about this story & I changed the old writing into a more interesting exciting story. Hope you enjoy

Hawks Revenge

Once there was a Hawk as fast as lightning it could saw through trees in 2 seconds it was a predators to different other species of birds including the Falcon, The famous dodo bird that is naturally extinct & the earth's most natural bird predator the the bald eagle. That bird can saw through trees 10x as fast as the hawk it could breath underwater for 1 whole minute it is the most extreme bird in the world.

Hawks were fascinating creatures. They are as fast as lightning and could saw through trees in 2 seconds. It was a predators to different other species of birds including the Falcon, the famous dodo bird that is naturally extinct and the earth's most natural bird predator the the bald eagle. That bird can saw through trees 10 times as fast as the hawk. It could also breath underwater for 1 whole minute. Often people call it the most extreme bird in the world. 

Fia-Fia Promotion

This is a promotion for Fia Fia so more people can put stalls in, support the children of Pt England School & help the parents be the tutors of the group for there kids.



So Come to Fia Fia April the 7th 7:00pm 

Memorial Service

Today at assembly we lost our loving year 5 netball coach & performing arts teacher beside Miss M Priscilla Tui she was a hard working mum & she always had time for this school she helped with kids who had no lunch & she baked he delicious pineapple pie she did our sausage sizzle for a fundraiser she gave the school the tux shop. She had 5 kids there names are Rowana, Raewen-eve, Cruz, Ollie, Ofili, She was always committed into our school she was our best year 5 netball coach she was great Mum a great member of the school. She had a great life & a great family R.I.P

Re-Crafting

Re-crafting & De constructing for our sentences in our presentations so we can breakdown words & sentences so we can find the right punctuation for our learning so our sentences could be really good with our other literacy tasks.

What a good brother looks like

Being a good brother is to be there when he they are not happy or when they are sad
A good brother is someone who is kind
A good brother is someone that helps you when something bad happened
A good brother is when you helping people who are not having a great day at school


A good brother is someone that is really helpful when they are getting bullied & you help them so they can be allright & better so they will be ok to come to school ever day. A good brother is someone that protects his family & friends whenever there getting hurt. A good brother is someone that is strong brave & will protect his friends & family whenever they are down.



A good brother is someone who is always using positive language.

A good brother is someone who uses positive/encouraging words to & gestures

What a good brother looks like & sounds like

Letter to Miss Berry

Dear Miss Berry

How are you feeling about 2016?

I’m feeling pretty sad that year 8s left because I had lots of friends while we were with the year 8s. Just yesterday we started school I was really nervous to be in classes with different people from year 6 going into year 7.

Who do you live with at home? What memories do you have on when you were younger?

When I was Just 2 years old I stayed in australia with my cousins I was a big fan of Thomas & The Tank Engine my Grandparents are still telling the story. When I was 1 I was crawling and then my mum was using shaving cream then I crawled right under her legs and I bumped her leg then she go shaving cream right on my hair.

What are your hobbies and talents? Tell me about something you are good at

My Hobbies are Touch & Playing games on my PS4. My Talents is Soccer I really love soccer I am a major football fan my favourite team is FCB that stands for FC Barcelona .

Josh